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Crossing the Cairn

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I was told not to step past the stones.

The ferryman had not raised his voice when he said it. He had not threatened me, or explained himself, or even looked especially concerned. He rested his pole against the riverbank, nodded toward the willow grove, and spoke as though stating a fact, not a rule.

“That place is not meant to be entered alone,” he said.

At the time, I nodded as if I understood and crossed the bank anyway.

The grove felt wrong immediately, though not…hostile. The air was cool, heavy with river damp and leaf shadow, and the willows leaned inward. Wind chimes hung from their branches, reed and driftwood knocking softly together in no pattern I could follow. It was the sort of place that should have felt peaceful. Instead, it felt attentive.

The cairn itself was small. Smaller than the stories implied. A low mound of rounded stones, carefully stacked but without ornament, it was barely large enough to suggest that it marked two lives rather than one. There were no sigils, no offerings of gold or coin, nothing to elevate it beyond what the river had already provided. Ribbons hung from nearby branches in pairs, faded by sun and weather, their knots neat and deliberate. Someone had left two painted stones at the water’s edge, set side by side as if they might speak to one another when no one was listening.

I thought I understood the ferryman then.

I believed it was a question about reverence, or custom, or some local rule that I had failed to learn properly. I told myself it was a matter of respect, that intention would be enough, and then stepped closer.

The river was slow, wide and patient. I knelt, reaching into the water to wash my hands as I had seen others do from a distance. The cold bit sharply, grounding me. For a moment, I considered speaking the words I had prepared; grievances I carried, like stones of my own.

The cairn did not press upon me. It did not ask anything. It waited.

I realized then that whatever vow I chose to make would be heard without judgment. It would not be shaped, corrected, or returned to me changed. It would simply exist, witnessed by water and stone.

But there was no one beside me.

Still, I reached for a stone and placed it on the cairn. It sat there without protest or acknowledgment, one more piece added to a structure that had never promised to respond.

I hesitated, my hand hovering over a second stone. I did not know who it would be for, or from, only that placing it felt like completing something I had not truly begun.

That was when the space beside me ceased to be empty.

The ferryman stood just within the grove’s edge, his pole still resting where he had left it. He had not followed me so much as remained, patient and unintrusive. He did not meet my eyes, did not speak, did not ask what I meant to say. He stepped forward, selected a stone from the riverbank, and placed it beside mine.

The closeness was sudden and quiet. We shared no history, no names, no intention beyond the act itself. And yet the weight of it settled between us, unmistakable. This was not reflection, this was simply…presence, accepted without explanation or claim.

Only then did I understand what the Cairn required. Only then did I understand the ferryman.

We knelt there together for a time. No words were spoken. None were needed.

When I rose, he was already turning back toward the water. Anywhere else, I would have thanked him. But he did not wait for it. The grove did not react. The chimes continued their quiet, uneven song. The river flowed on.

The promise I now carried with me as I stepped back onto the bank was no longer mine alone, even though I would never see him again. But I knew now that he had not been guarding the Cairn from me. He had been waiting, gently, to see whether I would understand what it asked for.

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Jan 21, 2026 23:23

Cool one, my favorite part was, The ferryman stood just within the frove's edge... selected a stone from the riverbank and placed it beside mine. This moment felt so nice to read.

Jan 22, 2026 02:26

Thank you for reading! I'm really glad that moment stood out for you.

Jan 22, 2026 18:14

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Jan 22, 2026 20:54

Call me ancient, but I don't really use Instagram at all. I do use Discord, though, and my username there is the same as here on WorldAnvil.

Jan 22, 2026 20:58

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Jan 22, 2026 00:22

This chapter is hauntingly beautiful your prose feels like it’s breathing, with every detail of the grove and the cairn so alive that I could almost hear the chimes and feel the river’s patience. I loved the quiet intensity between the narrator and the ferryman; the way presence alone carries so much weight is stunningly done. There’s such a meditative, almost sacred rhythm to the scene that stayed with me long after I finished reading. How do you think this moment will shape the narrator going forward, now that they’ve carried this silent understanding with them?

Jan 22, 2026 02:25

Thank you so much for reading, and for such a thoughtful comment. I think that kind of shared understanding lingers. It will change how future choices feel for this piece's narrator. I'm really happy to hear the moment stayed with you.

Jan 22, 2026 19:48

You’re very welcome. That lingering feeling is exactly what stayed with me it was subtle, but very powerful. Thank you for sharing it. Also, do you have another place where readers can talk with you about your writing?

Jan 22, 2026 20:52

I don't really have a platform or anything like that. I'm usually easiest to reach on Discord, and my username there is the same as my WorldAnvil name, if you'd like to reach out.

Jan 23, 2026 01:18

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