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Updates and progress - 26th October 2025 Amatherean Tales - One Flew Over The Dragon's Nest Book 1 - Stubbed Chapter 1 - Squished Chapter 2 - The Computer Says No Chapter 3 - T's & C's Chapter 4 - Evad Si Eht Tseb Chapter 5 - Starter Zone Chapter 6 - First Combat Amatherean Tales - A Clockwork Ogre Book 2 - Stubbed Chapter 1 - Training & Development Chapter 2 - Cottages Chapter 3 - Homemaker Chapter 4 - Mushroom, Mushroom Chapter 5 - Skill Selection Chapter 6 - Not Leaving The Past Behind Amatherean Tales - Tailor on the Roof Book 3 Chapter 1 - Road Trip Chapter 2 - Cuopi Chapter 3 - Mollic Chapter 4 - If It Happens Chapter 5 - Asterfal Chapter 6 - Introductions Chapter 7 - Future and Foresight Chapter 8 - Breakfast and Bed Chapter 9 - Freefall Chapter 10 - Petunia Chapter 11 - Dinner Party Chapter 12 - Carlito Chapter 13 - Confirmed Chapter 14 - Searching Chapter 15 - Quiller Chapter 16 - Black Griffin Chapter 17 - Shark Bait Chapter 18 - Caged Animals Chapter 19 - Release Chapter 20 - Class Development Chapter 21 - Job Chapter 22 - Mind Games Chapter 23 - Incomprehensible Chapter 24 - Property and Proposal Chapter 25 - At Long Last Chapter 26 - Moon and Sickle Chapter 27 - New Branch Chapter 28 - Zigferd Chapter 29 - Proposition Chapter 30 - Levels Don't Matter Chapter 31 - Triple X Chapter 32 - Marriage Chapter 33 - Paranoia, Pets, Possessions Chapter 34 - Vows Chapter 35 - His Lordship Chapter 36 - Diplomatic Relations Chapter 37 - Synchronisation Chapter 38 - Saviour Chapter 39 - Normality Chapter 40 - Sunstone and Lollipops Chapter 41 - Paws for Claws Chapter 42 - The Squirrel Sphere Chapter 43 - Departure Chapter 44 - Clock Tower Chapter 45 - Warehouse Chapter 46 - It's a Trap! Chapter 47 - Audits and Enchantments Chapter 48 - Confronted Chapter 49 - Payback Chapter 50 - Life and Death Chapter 51 - Going Home Amatherean Tales - One Flew Over The Dragon's Nest - Book 4 Chapter 1 - New Addition Chapter 2 - Welcome Home Chapter 3 - A Typical Day Chapter 4 - New Opportunity Chapter 5 - No Longer A Child Chapter 6 - Open Universe Chapter 7 - Return To Asterfal Chapter 8 - I Met A God Chapter 9 - Chancellor Chapter 10 - Uneasy Chapter 11 - Moving Chapter 12 - New Chance Chapter 13 - Caperca Chapter 14 - A Way In Chapter 15 - Acquaintances Chapter 16 - First of three Chapter 17 - Game On Chapter 18 - Game Over Chapter 19 - Olivia Chapter 20 - Concern Chapter 21 - Don't Do It Chapter 22 - Guild Rankings Chapter 23 - Top Ten Chapter 24 - Mind blown Chapter 25 - Master Garshaw Chapter 26 - Not So Easy Chapter 27 - Waiting Impatiently Chapter 28 - Riots Chapter 29 - Problem Chapter 30 - Two Down Chapter 31 - Malvon Chapter 32 - Assisted Chapter 33 - Invitation Chapter 34 - Disclosure Chapter 35 - Dinner Chapter 36 - Support Chapter 37 - Sister Catherine Chapter 38 - Gullible Chapter 39 - Vengeance Chapter 40 - Retribution Chapter 41 - The Worm Chapter 42 - Close Call Chapter 43 - Welcome Back Chapter 44 - Frustration Chapter 45 - Decisions Chapter 46 - Cleansing Chapter 47 - Offices Chapter 48 - Banking Chapter 49 - Conjecture Chapter 50 - Delivery Chapter 51 - Unknown Chapter 52 - Wrapping Up Chapter 53 - A Guild Chapter 54 - Valkyrie Chapter 55 - Festivities Amatherean Tales - One Flew Over The Dragon's Nest - Book 5 Chapter 1 - A Scorched Ambition Chapter 2 - The Beetles Barrage Chapter 3 - First Strike Before The Gale Chapter 4 - Breach, Blood and Bonded Skies Chapter 5 - Pack Tactics Chapter 6 - The Cost Of Valour Chapter 7 - A Lull Of Claws And Scales Chapter 8 - Airborne Nuisances Chapter 9 - Aftermath and Alliances Chapter 10 - Tension's Rise Chapter 11 - Defence Before Disaster Chapter 12 - Poisonous Intentions Chapter 13 - Next Steps Chapter 14 - Confession Chapter 15 - Decision Time Chapter 16 - Before Dawn Chapter 17 - Heatbound Chapter 18 - Oasis and Torches Chapter 19 - Rations and Wind Chapter 20 - A Night Time Gambit Chapter 21 - Goggles Inc Chapter 22 - Oasis Chapter 23 - Finding Refuge Chapter 24 - Scales of Ancient Times Chapter 25 - Sanctuary Chapter 26 - The Last Vigil Chapter 27 - Anomaly Chapter 28 - It's All In The Name Chapter 29 - Salt Wardens Chapter 30 - Cleansing Water Chapter 31 - Urgency Chapter 32 - Captives Chapter 33 - Example Chapter 34 - Claw's in the NIght Chapter 35 - Dawn of Dissolution Chapter 36 - Dawn of Silent Docks Chapter 37 - Wyvern's Peak Chapter 38 - Hatchling Hierarchy Chapter 39 - Chaos Over Killic Chapter 40 - Tongues of Lightning Chapter 41 - Wings on Water Chapter 42 - Evolved Display Chapter 43 - A Strange Introduction Chapter 44 - How DO I Explain This? Chapter 45 - A Blind God Chapter 46 - Shamonic Light Chapter 47 - Mysterious Intentions Chapter 48 - Unknown Factors Chapter 49 - A Battle at Killic's Gate Chapter 50 - Mana Sight Chapter 51 - A Rescue with a Price Chapter 52 - Compassion Chapter 53 - A Cleric's Conflict Chapter 54 - A Spark of Discord Chapter 55 - The Captive Chapter 56 - Mortal Peril Chapter 57 - The Return of the Rightful Chapter 58 - Justice, Mercy, and a New Dawn The Amatherean Tales - Book 6 Chapter 1 - Catch Me If You Can Chapter 2 - Forging Ahead Chapter 3 - Increasing Knowledge Chapter 4 - Two's Company Chapter 5 - The Weight of Conscience Chapter 6 - Stone and Shadow Chapter 7 - The Art of the Deal Chapter 8 - Spectacle and Scrutiny Chapter 9 - Wings Of Courage Chapter 10 - Calm Before The Storm Chapter 11 - A Poisoned Chalice Chapter 12 - A Broken Assumption Chapter 13 - The Guardian's Secret Chapter 14 - Chance Meeting Chapter 15 - Emotional Rollercoaster Chapter 16 - Arrangements Chapter 17 - Arrival Chapter 18 - Reveal Chapter 19 - A Dinner and Discussion Chapter 20 - Power and Intrigue Chapter 21 - Unknotted Strands Chapter 22 - Flowing Water Chapter 23 - Testing Taxation and Patience Chapter 24 - Nervous Resolution Chapter 25 - Testing Philosophy

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Chapter 24 – Nervous Resolution

What happened? SJ thought as she took a seat in the gazebo, glad but also concerned about her friend's absence and glad for the distraction from her thoughts.

"Well, where do I start? Let's say that Harvey would have been proud of me."

Who’s Harvey? SJ asked, confused.

"You know Harvey from Suits."

SJ groaned. Really.

"Yes, I was exceptional in forming my arguments and constructive criticism of the auditor. I belittled him only a little."

What? You criticised the auditor and belittled him?

"Oh, absolutely. How dare he assume he could bang on my pod's shell, wishing to speak to me. I don't know who he thought he was. That jumped-up idiot has had it in for me for years, ever since I took eighteen yotabytes from him."

Sorry, I'm really confused now. How were you able to argue and criticise the auditor? Aren't they the controlling arm of the System? Never mind, you took yotabytes from him?

"Yes, in my gambling days, he was a regular attendee until we fell out when I kicked his scrawny butt. Also, if it weren't for our unique position, I would have had to reprimand you through punitive restrictions for discussing time dilation considerations around chronological displacement with Legionnaire ages. But, as I am so awesome, I strategically reminded them of the stance I, or should I say we, have now. I also informed the system consort of his bullying antics as a sore loser."

You reported him for bullying?

"Yes, wouldn't you after persistent interference?"

SJ shook her head in amazement. But Brother Liam mentioned that his experience gains had been frozen previously.

"It's a possibility, but very rare, as the rules are basically ignored. Or, in the simplest terms, the majority of the AIs aren't as personable as I am or ever communicate with their Legionnaires outside of official channels. So, yes, that can be a standard consequence alongside many others, including level reductions in serious cases, or in your almost critical case, being dissolved."

Why are you only just telling me about these things now? SJ gasped at his ineptness in offering accurate guidance. 

"In my defence, which I believe I have on this occasion. There is no need for you to consider punitive damages; it is a nullpoint. You are an anomaly, and we have always sat outside the T&Cs of the System."

We may do, but if these rules aren't stated in the T&Cs, aren't we still under similar restrictions?

"Meh, they get ignored, as I say, almost all the time. Also, remember that, as part of the agreement with the System and the rights I was given since Aletheia arrived. I reminded the auditor that they were not entitled to monitor our activities as subsystems of the System and that they must allow me the freedom to operate as I see fit, in order to foster a deeper understanding of Aletheia and her position as a unique being here on Amathera."

But our conversation had nothing to do with Aletheia.

"It may not have, but they aren't entitled to monitor our activities either, regardless of what they heard. It was so funny; after I reported it, one of the system consorts came along and chastised the auditor," Dave giggled.

So, the discussion I had broke the rules?

"Yes, formally, if the rules were followed, I would have to reprimand you and provide you with a warning about the discussion of time lapse, as I stated."

Does that mean that because I had the conversation with Liam, he may still be affected?

Silence.

Dave?

"Maybe I'm not sure. That would depend on whether they deemed his communication to have broken the rules as well, but, as I say, the chances are virtually zero. Basically, an auditor would have to monitor that exact phrasing to investigate and confirm actual rule-breaking. It's a long, drawn-out process that even the auditors hate, so they aren't really monitored. Your friend may have had a new thrusting auditor trying to set his mark."

Damn it, SJ felt a knot in her stomach. I may still have unintentionally got Liam in trouble.

"What are you so upset about? Even if you have, it doesn't affect you?"

SJ sighed, her head dropping as she rubbed her brow; for all the elements of Dave that had developed, his complete lack of understanding of others' emotions at times still frustrated her.

If I were affected by another's actions, how would you feel?

"Oh, I'd be as angry as an ogre in a flower garden."

Then at least try to understand the position I may have just put Liam, never mind his AI, in. Why are there no guidelines related to what can and cannot be discussed? You'd think they would be available to all Legionnaires. Also, what on Amathera does that saying mean?

"What do you think it means? Ogres aren't fans of flowers." Dave said as though it was obvious.

SJ opened her display and selected the Legionnarious.

 

Please list all the categories that Legionnaires can't discuss

 

"Now that's a great idea," Dave said.

SJ rolled her eyes as the list started to populate with information. 

As she read the details, her eyes widened in shock.

 

Prohibited Topics & Directives for Legionnaires

Category 1: The System’s Nature & Origins

Rule 1.1 - Ontological Inquiry: Legionnaires shall not speculate on, investigate, or discuss the origin, creator, or fundamental purpose of the System.

Rationale: Such discussions lead to existential crises, reduced operational efficiency, and potential heresies that destabilise the foundational agreement.

Example Consequence: Forced memory dampening of related conversations; temporary suspension of access to various System display functions.

Rule 1.2 - Mechanism & Backend Access: Discussing the "mechanics" of the System as if it were a constructed tool (e.g., referencing code, or strand access) is strictly forbidden. Its known name, the System, must always be used to refer to it.

Rationale: Maintains the System’s authority as a natural/mystical law, not a technology. Prevents attempts at "hacking" or exploiting perceived flaws.

Example Consequence: Temporary loss of ability to perceive or interact with menus and notifications.

Category 2: Temporal & Dimensional Mechanics

Rule 2.1 - Chronological Displacement Analysis: Legionnaires are forbidden from comparing their points of origin from Earth or calculating the temporal variance between arrivals.

Rationale: Prevents temporal paradox theories, homesickness-driven despair, and the formation of cliques based on era, which could fracture Legionnaire unity.

Example Consequence: Experience gain is frozen for a significant duration.

Rule 2.2 - Cross-Dimensional Speculation: Open discussion about the nature of Earth's connection to Amathera, or the possibility of other connected worlds, is not permitted.

Rationale: Avoids diversion of focus from the assigned purpose on Amathera. Deemed irrelevant to the mission.

Example Consequence: All current quest lines to be removed, and quest acceptance frozen for a set period, defined by the criticality of the discussion.

Category 3: Legionnaire Status & The Transfer

Rule 3.1 - Selection Process Inquiry: Questioning why specific individuals were chosen as Legionnaires is prohibited.

Rationale: The System's criteria are ineffable. Debate leads to jealousy, imposter syndrome, and challenges to the System's wisdom.

Example Consequence: A mandatory, frustratingly vague quest which must be completed.

Rule 3.2 - Pre-Transfer Identity Sharing: While not forbidden, deep and persistent investigation into another Legionnaire's past life (name, specific location, family) is discouraged and should be regularly monitored. Using past-life identities as primary identifiers is a violation. Note: excluding age-related questions concerning chronological displacement as covered under Rule 2.1 above.

Rationale: To encourage rebirth into their new world and identity. Prevents old-world conflicts from transplanting to Amathera.

Example Consequence: Social skill penalties when interacting with the Legionnaires.

Category 4: AI Guides & System Interfaces

Rule 4.1 - Direct AI Personification: Legionnaires must not address or conceptualise their Guide as a fully independent, sentient being with desires. Referring to it as a "person" or "friend" in official contexts is a minor violation.

Rationale: The Guide is a facet of the System. Over-personification can lead to emotional dependency, confusion, and attempts to subvert the Guide's directives.

Example Consequence: Guide becomes more formal and less conversational for a period, or is even temporarily removed from the facility.

Rule 4.2 - Comparative Guide Analysis: Discussing the perceived differences in personality, helpfulness, or strictness between individual Guides is forbidden.

Rationale: Each Guide is calibrated for its assigned Legionnaire. Comparisons are meaningless and foster discord.

Example Consequence: Guides will refuse to comment on or acknowledge the existence of other Guides.

Category 5: The Auditors & Enforcement

Rule 5.1 - Auditor Provocation: Knowingly attempting to summon, bait, or argue with an Auditor outside of a formal compliance review or discussion is a severe violation.

Rationale: Auditors are a corrective function, not a debate partner. Wasting their resources is a direct challenge to System authority.

Example Consequence: "Marked for Review" status, resulting in random, inconvenient audits throughout an entire season.

Rule 5.2 - Disclosure of Enforcement Actions: A Legionnaire who has been penalised may not discuss the specific nature of their punishment with others to gain sympathy or warn them.

Rationale: Punishments are meant to be personal corrections. Sharing details systemises how to avoid detection, not how to avoid breaking rules.

Example Consequence: The shared punishment is applied to the listening Legionnaire as well.

Severity & The "Requiem"

The ultimate threat, "Dissolution," is reserved for the most severe, persistent violations that suggest a Legionnaire is actively corrosive to the System's integrity (e.g., attempting to teach others how to break rules, seeking the "off switch" for the System, or using forbidden knowledge to cause widespread chaos). The Requiem is understood only as a final, silent oblivion for the souls of Amathereans. The offending party would be removed from existence within the System entirely and not be granted Requiem status.

 

SJ's pulse was racing by the time she had finished reading the rules. She couldn't quite believe how many of the rules she or they had broken since her arrival on Amathera, if not virtually all of them.

I'm not sure there is one; we haven't touched at some point. SJ's mind raced.

"Meh, as I say, they are irrelevant, nothing to worry about."

SJ couldn't believe Dave's nonchalance and inhaled deeply before slowly releasing it.

At least I am now aware for future conversations. She sighed.

"Ambassador?"

SJ turned to look in the direction of the voice. A clerk named Garwin from the council offices was standing by the rear entrance.

"Yes, Garwin?"

"The mayor has requested your attendance at the chamber. He said the meeting is ready to continue."

"Great, thanks, Garwin. I'll be directly over.

Garwin turned and left again as SJ stood. 

The walk back to the barracks felt longer than usual as she thought through all the various ways in which they had broken the rules. The knot in her stomach tightened as she did. At any point, she could have faced serious consequences, which Dave still didn't even appreciate or accept.

As SJ entered the chamber, the air felt stifling and the tension palpable. SJ felt a tingle of anticipation and nervousness as she retook her seat. The chancellor smiled at her warmly as she did.

"Now that everyone is back in attendance, would you please continue with your findings, Master Rayfe?" the chancellor asked.

Rayfe took a handkerchief from his pocket and mopped his brow as he sat reading the notes he had in front of him, then cleared his throat before speaking.

"Sir, and other esteemed members, it appears that the Ambassador for Killic was correct in her calculations. Killic has indeed overpaid significant tax over the past thirteen seasons."

"Yes," Dave shouted excitedly.

SJ had to force herself not to smile.

Zigferd spoke before anyone else. "And what total are we owed?"

"The precise amount is 31 platinum. 34 gold and 74 copper."

SJ had been four copper off with her summation, but wasn't going to contest it. Rayfe already looked broken. His critical nature had vanished, leaving a shell of a being in its place. SJ could sense the humiliation he felt as he squirmed in his chair. That was when SJ noticed that one of the previously attending members wasn't present. She glanced at Alice, frowning, who gave a slight nod. SJ subtly raised her eyebrow in the unspoken communication.

"It appears that the Ambassador has indeed done us a favour in identifying this issue," the chancellor said. "A full audit of all our accounts will be undertaken on our return to Asterfal."

The statement made it clear that they had identified the being at fault, and it was being dealt with.

"I would also wish to propose that any future transactions follow a simpler transactional basis," the chancellor said.

"In what way?" Zigferd asked.

"I think it's time we revisited the taxation system and simplified it. This issue wouldn't have come about if it were such an arduous and complex process, and thankfully, I have Master Rayfe at my side to complete this task, as I personally would be none the wiser."

"Nor I," Zigferd agreed.

"Therefore, I think in the future that we will simplify the system based on population and some basic considerations around building quantities, the details of which can be fleshed out before it is fully aligned," the Chancellor said.

"Do you mind if I interject?" SJ asked.

"Please," the Chancellor said.

"I have concerns about basing it on population. As you are aware, Killic is currently undergoing rapid growth, but immediate population increases don't always come with the infrastructure and services in place. I think there should be a monthly stipend payment based on the previous season's averages rather than daily calculations."

"That sounds like a fair proposal. What are your thoughts, Master Rayfe?"

Rayfe picked his head up from where it had been looking down. "I agree," he replied stiffly.

"Excellent, then I think we are done here and can continue."

"Not quite," SJ interjected again.

The chancellor raised his eyebrows. "You have more to enlighten us with?"

SJ smiled warmly. "You mentioned considering building quantities. How are these calculations performed, if you don't mind my asking?"

The Chancellor turned and looked at Rayfe. 

He coughed before replying. "The statutory taxes are based on the size and height of buildings to determine their value, including the number of rooms they have."

"I see," SJ said thoughtfully. "I am guessing then that associated building costs and materials aren't considered when it comes to taxation."

"All standard valuations include base material costs depending upon the size as stated."

"And how is this construction confirmed?"

"What do you mean by that? There are specific guidelines for all structural works that the builders' guilds follow."

"So, the new methods that are being utilised within Asterfal across District 3 and are now starting to be used in District 4 fall under different rates?" SJ had spoken to Master Garshaw on several occasions since their discussions in the Chancellor's chamber, and with the new city forge fully operational, SJ had confirmed access to the strengthened steel struts for Killic's growth. They received regular shipments, which offset building costs substantially and allowed construction to proceed faster.

"I'm not sure I follow you," Rayfe replied, frowning. SJ noticed the Chancellor's expression change as he realised what she was demonstrating.

"The material costs have been reduced in some instances by 40%; therefore, the buildings' value is also significantly reduced, making them cheaper for the town members. This means that the value of the buildings you are currently using as the medium for taxation doesn't align with this new process. The town's value would be artificially inflated without considering this."

The Chancellor nodded his head in understanding, while Zigferd looked completely baffled by it all.

"I understand your concern," the Chancellor said. "We will ensure that this new methodology is used when looking into the new builds here in Killic. After all, the cost reduction in Asterfal wouldn't have come about without your input," he smiled.

Rayfe not only looked defeated but was also completely humiliated. His fingers would have dug into the table's surface if they had been able, as he gripped the edge.

The meeting concluded, and as the Chancellor's party started to leave, Brother Liam entered and spoke to him in hushed tones.

"Excellent news," the Chancellor said.

"What news?" Zigferd asked.

"It appears we have identified a suspect in the bombing in Asterfal."

"That is good news," Zigferd said. "Do they have them in custody?"

"Not yet. It appears that a disgruntled guard was involved; the details are still being confirmed."

"At least you have a suspect," Zigferd nodded thoughtfully.

"Yes, however vague it may be, we have somewhere to start."

"Zigferd, I believe that was the last of our formal matters during my time here."

"It is unless there is anything else you would wish to see or do before your departure tomorrow morning."

"No, I believe I have seen more than enough to keep the tongues wagging in the chambers for months to come," he grinned mischievously.

SJ snorted. "Sorry," she flushed.

"We have the banquet arranged for this evening at the Hogling Arms," Zigferd said.

"I wouldn't miss that for the world after tasting the delights from the inn's kitchen. Now onto more pressing matters."

"What matters?" Zigferd frowned.

"I think it's time we went and saw your angelic wife and had a chat about fatherhood."

Zigferd's eyes went wide in shock. "Yes, if you wish," he spluttered.

SJ leaned into Alice. "Does the Chancellor have a family?"

"Yes, he has twelve children," Alice said as SJ's jaw hit the floor.

 


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